Alchemic_Spider wrote:I don't believe those panels to have any real comedy. it's like all those things have been done before in other comics.....you should gain your own style instead of piggybacking off previous strips before.
You're certainly getting there. I think you've laid down a great foundation for a good constructive criticism, but I think you could stand to be a little more positive about it. I'm not saying turn criticism into praise, if you don't like it, you don't like it, it doesn't appeal to you, I understand that. Perhaps you could make a suggestion or two on how you think this comic could be improved. That was a good start though my friend.