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[eyp]

I don't believe those panels to have any real comedy. it's like all those things have been done before in other comics.....you should gain your own style instead of piggybacking off previous strips before.

Better?

You're certainly getting there. I think you've laid down a great foundation for a good constructive criticism, but I think you could stand to be a little more positive about it. I'm not saying turn criticism into praise, if you don't like it, you don't like it, it doesn't appeal to you, I understand that. Perhaps you could make a suggestion or two on how you think this comic could be improved. That was a good start though my friend.

[Benderbrau]

You're certainly getting there. I think you've laid down a great foundation for a good constructive criticism, but I think you could stand to be a little more positive about it. I'm not saying turn criticism into praise, if you don't like it, you don't like it, it doesn't appeal to you, I understand that. Perhaps you could make a suggestion or two on how you think this comic could be improved. That was a good start though my friend.

What the fuck is this lovey dovey hippey hugging crap??

[Guest]

What the fuck is this lovey dovey hippey hugging crap??

The Outhouse is getting in touch with its feelings...

[S.F. Jude Terror]

I did a critically praised guest run on Doomie's webcomic. Six episodes. I hear they;re going to be collected as special bonus material in the upcoming New Comic Day Volume 1, available in stores... sometime this summer?

Here they are:

[eyp]

What the fuck is this lovey dovey hippey hugging crap??

Some people respond better to different methods of criticism you stupid old fuck.

[Benderbrau]

Needs more fourthman

[Benderbrau]

Some people respond better to different methods of criticism you stupid old fuck.

Don't you have a Facebook status to jerk off to?

[S.F. Jude Terror]

Why do I get the feeling Jude's gonna have another sleepless night very shortly?

I had to call out of work today.

[eyp]

Don't you have a Facebook status to jerk off to?

That makes no sense. Jerk off to words?

[Chubbles]

ha those are pretty funny jude

[Guest]

Jude....those aren't funny. Not at all. You're usually very funny to me though.

[Chubbles]

That makes no sense. Jerk off to words?

sexy words

[Benderbrau]

I had to call out of work today.

You better hope Alchemic doesn't send your posts to your boss.

[Potter Who]

Jude....those aren't funny. Not at all. You're usually very funny to me though.

You need to be more constructive, jerk

[Benderbrau]

That makes no sense. Jerk off to words?

Don't ask me to explain your creepy fetish.