As Arion said, you definitely need to refine your sense of anatomy. I'd add that you could use some work on your coloring too. I know you have some shadows in there, but overall, you need to show more contrast. The colors are still too flat.
The designs and the modeling are very good, though.
I'm curious about the lowered opacity on the word balloons. Is there a reason for that?
The witness said Mr Brown then called out to Ms Hay's adult daughter: "Look at this, I'm tittie-f***ing your mother!".
Jude Terror 12:19 AM
I put my dick in one of the bagels once.