I like your work you have good understanding of anatomy, also your ink work is very good. But when you use a black back ground around you characters maybe you should make the white space around them closer, so it contours the form.
Paul Render wrote:Those pages look decent. Your people are quite wonky, but that's ok. I bet your 200th page is gonna look a lot better than your first. You have talent man, don't let others negativity make you lose self confidence. Being an artist not everyone is gonna like your stuff. Artists need to be able to take a harsh critique from time to time.
Keep posting pages here when you can. What do you plan to do with this project? Self publish? E-book it?
Thanks allot, from your perspective could you please be more specific about whats wrong with the people? I would like to know all of you guys perspective so I can do the best work I possibly can.