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Postby zombiemichaeljackson » Sun Aug 17, 2008 12:07 pm

Feedback welcome and appreciated.

I know it reads kind of choppy, the original version was about 1,300 words longer and it suffered a lot cohesively when I started cutting it down. That's definitely something I'm working on for the next installment, where I take a look at The Big 10, Pac 10, and SEC.

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Postby Keb » Sun Aug 17, 2008 12:28 pm

When you write in small blocks like that, try listing. Sometimes it works out great, especially for sports writing. At least I find it does.

You're pretty thorough, but I know nothing about football.

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Postby Allen » Mon Aug 18, 2008 12:51 pm

Out of curiosity, but will there be an NFL column?

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Postby Allen » Mon Aug 18, 2008 12:52 pm

twoheads wrote:Feedback welcome and appreciated.

I know it reads kind of choppy, the original version was about 1,300 words longer and it suffered a lot cohesively when I started cutting it down. That's definitely something I'm working on for the next installment, where I take a look at The Big 10, Pac 10, and SEC.


The lack of Great West Football Conference coverage is disappointing. :cry: ;-) :P

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Postby C20Percent » Mon Aug 18, 2008 12:59 pm

Not enough Drew Weatherford coverage -- I would like you to go back and analyze every game he played last year, and tell me why he sucks cow testicles.

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Postby zombiemichaeljackson » Mon Aug 18, 2008 8:47 pm

Allen wrote:Out of curiosity, but will there be an NFL column?


I have no idea, you'd have to ask someone other than me.

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