(in case you are still lurking here's some constructive criticism)
Holy needs-an-editor Batman
who are the people in the first page?
"not coming" is two words and a file belonging to Private Rogers would be "Rogers' file"
what does that second paragraph have to do with anything?
it would be helpful if it was sooner than her third panel before we are told that the woman is Sharon Carter
for someone who only knows what she read in a file, she sure does get close to Steve real quick. Is Sharon a slut?
would you like to borrow a comma, semi colon, a punctuation book?
as a friend, I am offering you one of my commas. Its ok, I have extras.
good job with the racist imagery
"U.S> Army" ? Is the U.S greater than the Army?
what does the page before this have to do with anything? Who would start a conversation like that?
Of the two people talking you made the Irish looking redhead the Jew? There's avoiding stereotypes and then there is absurdity
its "high-tail" or "hightail"
that's a big tank
shield depth continuity issues
Overall - your choice of font color makes it hard to read sometimes, especially since I had to open each page as a new tab just to see the text.