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Re: CAPTAIN AMERICA GROUND ZERO continues.

Postby S.F. Jude Terror » Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:05 pm

Benderbrau wrote:Good ole Capcoop. Remember when he used to post here? Those were good times. Gooooooooooood times. sigh :(


He was one of the good ones.

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Re: CAPTAIN AMERICA GROUND ZERO continues.

Postby Benderbrau » Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:14 pm

S.F. Jude Terror wrote:
He was one of the good ones.

He shall be missed









Except by Mahoney who's headed off to stalk him.
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Re: CAPTAIN AMERICA GROUND ZERO continues.

Postby Alchemic_Spider » Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:18 pm

Benderbrau wrote:He shall be missed









Except by Mahoney who's headed off to stalk him.


I have to hold off. Working late tonight. I'll get back to him tomorrow...

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Re: CAPTAIN AMERICA GROUND ZERO continues.

Postby GHERU » Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:38 pm

(in case you are still lurking here's some constructive criticism)
Holy needs-an-editor Batman

who are the people in the first page?

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"not coming" is two words and a file belonging to Private Rogers would be "Rogers' file"

what does that second paragraph have to do with anything?

it would be helpful if it was sooner than her third panel before we are told that the woman is Sharon Carter

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for someone who only knows what she read in a file, she sure does get close to Steve real quick. Is Sharon a slut?

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would you like to borrow a comma, semi colon, a punctuation book?

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as a friend, I am offering you one of my commas. Its ok, I have extras.

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good job with the racist imagery

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"U.S> Army" ? Is the U.S greater than the Army?
what does the page before this have to do with anything? Who would start a conversation like that?

Of the two people talking you made the Irish looking redhead the Jew? There's avoiding stereotypes and then there is absurdity

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its "high-tail" or "hightail"

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lame

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that's a big tank

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shield depth continuity issues

Overall - your choice of font color makes it hard to read sometimes, especially since I had to open each page as a new tab just to see the text.
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Re: CAPTAIN AMERICA GROUND ZERO continues.

Postby SuperginraiX » Thu Aug 11, 2011 7:16 pm

Yeah, just looking at what RU posted (Hey, RU!), I'd say he was in desperate need of spell check, caption boxes, and word balloons. They'll help clarify the story a little bit. Also: RU's other comments.
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Re: CAPTAIN AMERICA GROUND ZERO continues.

Postby S.F. Jude Terror » Thu Aug 11, 2011 7:20 pm

SuperginraiX wrote:Yeah, just looking at what RU posted (Hey, RU!), I'd say he was in desperate need of spell check, caption boxes, and word balloons. They'll help clarify the story a little bit. Also: RU's other comments.


Yeah, I agree with Super (Hey, Super!), I gave some similar advice in the original thread a few months ago. Some more professional lettering and production would add a lot to this project. Also: less vile tirades at random commenters. :lol:

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Re: CAPTAIN AMERICA GROUND ZERO continues.

Postby SuperginraiX » Thu Aug 11, 2011 7:36 pm

S.F. Jude Terror wrote:
Yeah, I agree with Super (Hey, Super!), I gave some similar advice in the original thread a few months ago. Some more professional lettering and production would add a lot to this project. Also: less vile tirades at random commenters. :lol:

I don't know, Jude (Hey, Jude!), I've heard the saying that there's no such thing as bad press. Those people might not have read threads like THIS, though.
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Re: CAPTAIN AMERICA GROUND ZERO continues.

Postby Lord Simian » Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:03 pm

SuperginraiX wrote:I've heard the saying that there's no such thing as bad press.


Ah, but with behavior like that, he burned his bridge, which means he will never GET press from The Outhouse. I mean, we don't review fan fiction, but should he ever do anything original, we won't promote it.... :smt102

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Re: CAPTAIN AMERICA GROUND ZERO continues.

Postby GHERU » Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:05 pm

SuperginraiX wrote:Yeah, just looking at what RU posted (Hey, RU!), I'd say he was in desperate need of spell check, caption boxes, and word balloons. They'll help clarify the story a little bit. Also: RU's other comments.

and Super is too nice to say this (Hey, Super) but if I am pointing out spelling mistakes then there are some major problems.
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Re: CAPTAIN AMERICA GROUND ZERO continues.

Postby S.F. Jude Terror » Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:18 pm

GHERU wrote:and Super is too nice to say this (Hey, Super) but if I am pointing out spelling mistakes then there are some major problems.


Completely unrelated to RU (Hey RU!), I would in fact buy an autobiographical comic from Capcoop.

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Re: CAPTAIN AMERICA GROUND ZERO continues.

Postby Dragavon » Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:21 pm

GHERU wrote:and Super is too nice to say this (Hey, Super) but if I am pointing out spelling mistakes then there are some major problems.

It took GHERU (Hey, GHERU) to make me understand the panels that were posted. COOPCAP (Bye, COOPCAP) should take some classes in storytelling or storyboarding or something to improve his skill because currently the strip makes no sense.
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Re: CAPTAIN AMERICA GROUND ZERO continues.

Postby Lord Simian » Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:28 pm

Apparently, he also called me out in the comments at his fan fiction blog.

Can anyone help me undrstand why he called me out? I am fairly certain I never looked at his work before to comment...

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Re: CAPTAIN AMERICA GROUND ZERO continues.

Postby S.F. Jude Terror » Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:29 pm

Lord Simian wrote:Apparently, he also called me out in the comments at his fan fiction blog.

Can anyone help me undrstand why he called me out? I am fairly certain I never looked at his work before to comment...


I have to echo what Simian said (Hey Simian!), I don't get where that came from. Also: Learn to follow the post format. :P

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Re: CAPTAIN AMERICA GROUND ZERO continues.

Postby Lord Simian » Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:52 pm

S.F. Jude Terror wrote:
I have to echo what Simian said (Hey Simian!), I don't get where that came from. Also: Learn to follow the post format. :P

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Re: CAPTAIN AMERICA GROUND ZERO continues.

Postby superfictious » Sun Aug 14, 2011 2:08 pm

How do I keep missing the great ones in their prime?

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