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(here's some constructive criticism) who are the people in the first page?
That's not the first page. These blogs are tricky you have to read them upside down.
"not coming" is two words and a file belonging to Private Rogers would be "Rogers' file"
one is probably a type 'O'. So it's just a correction not criticism.
what does that second paragraph have to do with anything? it would be helpful if it was sooner than her third panel before we are told that the woman is Sharon Carter for someone who only knows what she read in a file, she sure does get close to Steve real quick. Is Sharon a slut?
Whoa, slow down. Slut? Obviously these are questions out of the ignorance of the characters history. I'm not going to complain.( Go to wikipedia and look it up. They have it-Stan!)
Army" ? Is the U.S greater than the Army? what does the page before this have to do with anything? Who would start a conversation like that? Of the two people talking you made the Irish looking redhead the Jew? There's avoiding stereotypes and then there is absurdity
That's a mighty racist comment there Mengele... James Kahn is a red headed Jew. Woody Allen, even Harpo Marx. Come on.
V2.47.jpg shield depth continuity issues Overall - your choice of font color makes it hard to read sometimes, especially since I had to open each page as a new tab just to see the text.
That's the idea. To Click on each page.
So try and read it again from the beginning and if you dont understand something or you don't get the connection, look it up. like the Sharon/ Cap relationship.
Thanks for all the corrections.