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[DMQuadro]

Please give me a feedback
is the humour of this story is fun and understandable?

[Doc Jon]

I really like the art style you have here. It reminds me of Mad magazine cartoons (which is high praise). The coloring is great as well. Basically the art is professional imo.

The lettering isn't though. There are times when it's confusing, and it doesn't enhance the otherwise stellar art. Some of the language feels a little awkward as well.

As far as the humor, I found it ok. Understandable, quirky, but I didn't laugh out loud.

[Doc Jon]

Oh, and welcome to the Art Corner and the Outhouse!

[DMQuadro]

Thank you, Doc Jon
Lettering is not ready yet. Text graphic is the very quick draft.
Scenario and graphic by the great (IMHO) Polish artist Tadeusz Baranowski.
We thinking for prepare a few his stories in a iPad version.
Sorry for my English, I'm Polish too, an haven't practice.

[Doc Jon]

Oh, ok then. My only problem with the art was the lettering. If that's just temporary, then cool.

[Doc Jon]

In the 3rd strip, in the panel with guy in the body cast.

You may want to change: "Computer is only a machine." to "A computer is only a machine."

[Mr. Poolman]

Reminds me a lot of MAD Magazine and Sergio Aragonés.

For humor it can be a bit too wordy, but it IS fun. The art is stellar!

[pazos001]

Excellent stuff. Classicly styled, and the subject is ever more relevant with the Google+ "automatic upload" debacle.