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is the humour

Poll ended at Sun Feb 12, 2012 11:18 am

fun
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understandable
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Doc Jon, Mr. Poolman
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not understandable
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Take a look for one page of project (for adult persons only)

Postby DMQuadro » Thu Feb 02, 2012 11:18 am

Please give me a feedback
is the humour of this story is fun and understandable?
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Re: Take a look for one page of project (for adult persons o

Postby Doc Jon » Thu Feb 02, 2012 11:52 am

I really like the art style you have here. It reminds me of Mad magazine cartoons (which is high praise). The coloring is great as well. Basically the art is professional imo.

The lettering isn't though. There are times when it's confusing, and it doesn't enhance the otherwise stellar art. Some of the language feels a little awkward as well.

As far as the humor, I found it ok. Understandable, quirky, but I didn't laugh out loud.
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Re: Take a look for one page of project (for adult persons o

Postby Doc Jon » Thu Feb 02, 2012 11:52 am

Oh, and welcome to the Art Corner and the Outhouse!
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Re: Take a look for one page of project (for adult persons o

Postby DMQuadro » Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:08 pm

Thank you, Doc Jon
Lettering is not ready yet. Text graphic is the very quick draft.
Scenario and graphic by the great (IMHO) Polish artist Tadeusz Baranowski.
We thinking for prepare a few his stories in a iPad version.
Sorry for my English, I'm Polish too, an haven't practice.
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Re: Take a look for one page of project (for adult persons o

Postby Doc Jon » Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:13 pm

Oh, ok then. My only problem with the art was the lettering. If that's just temporary, then cool.
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Re: Take a look for one page of project (for adult persons o

Postby Doc Jon » Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:14 pm

In the 3rd strip, in the panel with guy in the body cast.

You may want to change: "Computer is only a machine." to "A computer is only a machine."
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Re: Take a look for one page of project (for adult persons o

Postby Mr. Poolman » Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:16 pm

Reminds me a lot of MAD Magazine and Sergio Aragon├ęs.

For humor it can be a bit too wordy, but it IS fun. The art is stellar! :-D
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Re: Take a look for one page of project (for adult persons o

Postby pazos001 » Wed Jul 11, 2012 1:58 am

Excellent stuff. Classicly styled, and the subject is ever more relevant with the Google+ "automatic upload" debacle.
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After a limited web release of my graphic novel 'The Bends: One Shot' on graphicly.com ( available here: http://grph.ly/Ox6npn ), I am looking for funds to print the first 100 copies to take to local comic shops. I have a rough quote from Ka-Blam for $350 to print the first 100 in a manga-sized format. If you can contribute you will get your name printed on the back credits page. How cool is that?

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