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is the humour

Poll ended at Sun Feb 12, 2012 11:18 am
fun
1
33%
 
Mr. Poolman
understandable
2
67%
 
Doc Jon, Mr. Poolman
not fun
0
No votes
 
not understandable
0
No votes
 
  Total votes : 3

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DMQuadro

Faster Pussycat

Postby DMQuadro » Thu Feb 02, 2012 11:18 am

Please give me a feedback
is the humour of this story is fun and understandable?
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Doc Jon

Rain Partier

Postby Doc Jon » Thu Feb 02, 2012 11:52 am

I really like the art style you have here. It reminds me of Mad magazine cartoons (which is high praise). The coloring is great as well. Basically the art is professional imo.

The lettering isn't though. There are times when it's confusing, and it doesn't enhance the otherwise stellar art. Some of the language feels a little awkward as well.

As far as the humor, I found it ok. Understandable, quirky, but I didn't laugh out loud.
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Doc Jon

Rain Partier

Postby Doc Jon » Thu Feb 02, 2012 11:52 am

Oh, and welcome to the Art Corner and the Outhouse!

DMQuadro

Faster Pussycat

Postby DMQuadro » Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:08 pm

Thank you, Doc Jon
Lettering is not ready yet. Text graphic is the very quick draft.
Scenario and graphic by the great (IMHO) Polish artist Tadeusz Baranowski.
We thinking for prepare a few his stories in a iPad version.
Sorry for my English, I'm Polish too, an haven't practice.
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Doc Jon

Rain Partier

Postby Doc Jon » Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:13 pm

Oh, ok then. My only problem with the art was the lettering. If that's just temporary, then cool.
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Doc Jon

Rain Partier

Postby Doc Jon » Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:14 pm

In the 3rd strip, in the panel with guy in the body cast.

You may want to change: "Computer is only a machine." to "A computer is only a machine."
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Mr. Poolman

Twenty-Something

Postby Mr. Poolman » Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:16 pm

Reminds me a lot of MAD Magazine and Sergio Aragon├ęs.

For humor it can be a bit too wordy, but it IS fun. The art is stellar! :-D
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pazos001

Whale Castrato

Postby pazos001 » Wed Jul 11, 2012 1:58 am

Excellent stuff. Classicly styled, and the subject is ever more relevant with the Google+ "automatic upload" debacle.

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