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I need some feedback on these

Postby Timbales » Fri Mar 16, 2012 9:11 am

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It's a thing going on at another site - create a pop single cover for two people that have not done a duet together before. I chose Adam Levine and Lana Del Rey.

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Re: I need some feedback on these

Postby Chesscub » Fri Mar 16, 2012 9:26 am

I like the second one a little better. The font in the first is a bit harsh to the eyes.

The second one, I like the plainer font but I think you could use the mixed color that you used in it to drive the eye where you want to drive it.

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Re: I need some feedback on these

Postby eltopo » Fri Mar 16, 2012 9:31 am

Timbales wrote:
deliverme.jpg
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It's a thing going on at another site - create a pop single cover for two people that have not done a duet together before. I chose Adam Levine and Lana Del Rey.

feedback, critique, suggestions welcome

I like the second one better,I like the minimalist font
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Re: I need some feedback on these

Postby Timbales » Fri Mar 16, 2012 10:37 am

the second one I was going for "artists trying to be hipsters" cred


here's a different set that's more trashy, straight-up pop

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Re: I need some feedback on these

Postby Chesscub » Fri Mar 16, 2012 10:41 am

Timbales wrote:the second one I was going for "artists trying to be hipsters" cred


here's a different set that's more trashy, straight-up pop

whipem.jpg


I love this one. :smt005

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Re: I need some feedback on these

Postby Timbales » Fri Mar 16, 2012 10:50 am

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Re: I need some feedback on these

Postby Chesscub » Fri Mar 16, 2012 12:19 pm

Timbales wrote:minor tweak

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The one thing I think make make sense is to see if you can color Katy's lips the same shade as Nicki's. Tie it together.

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Re: I need some feedback on these

Postby SpiderGeek » Fri Apr 20, 2012 8:10 am

The second one is definitely better than the first. Or try the first with another font maybe

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Re: I need some feedback on these

Postby Regulator » Sat Apr 28, 2012 12:48 am

The one with the typewriter font shouldn't have their names on their bodies ... maybe stacked on each side like:

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Re: I need some feedback on these

Postby Doc Jon » Sat Apr 28, 2012 5:21 am

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I don't like the mask you use on this one. The skin tone on Perry doesn't look natural, but it's not extreme enough to look like it's meant to be a graphical tweak. She just looks sickly. Sickly hot, but still sickly.
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Re: I need some feedback on these

Postby Amoebas » Sat Apr 28, 2012 7:01 am

Wow - I am so not into whatever they call music today. From those above, I've only heard of Katy Perry because she has breasts.

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Re: I need some feedback on these

Postby The Method » Thu May 03, 2012 7:27 pm

Of the first two, I concur with those that stated the simple minimalistic second one works great.

The Katy/Nikki one I'm not a big fan of the red unless you used the red with the two ladies, for instance, their lipstick. Also, the font color does nothing for the piece. Perhaps, cut the letters out of the red revealing their bodies underneath.

You've put some good work into it. It just needs to come together.

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