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by **Oni2030** » Fri Aug 03, 2012 10:20 pm

I have absolutely no possible way to explain why I would draw a woman like this. She makes a pretty good character for my comic Hybrid Zero though, and no she does not walk around nude in the comic.

Currently I'm working on the front.

by **shannonh** » Sat Aug 04, 2012 7:55 am

Reminds me of this old women's rights propaganda for some reason...

by **GHERU** » Sat Aug 04, 2012 9:44 am

I like the head
Id have to see the body in context, but its a bit crude to my tastes (im a fuddy duddy)

by **Doc Jon** » Sat Aug 04, 2012 1:39 pm

I like the first piece a lot. I really like the almost animated feel of it.

The second piece is just ok for me. The neck seems awkward, the way it's turning. Still very solid stuff.

by **DMM** » Sat Aug 04, 2012 1:44 pm

wow, those are some huge, pendulous breasts

by **Oni2030** » Sun Aug 05, 2012 7:06 am

Thank you all for the comments. I post stuff here that I wouldn't get away with posting on Pencil jack.

Currently I live on disability and have undifferentiated schizophrenia, I spend the majority of my time working on my comic which I will be posting on my website once it is complete. I hear voices and have frightening visions. When an artistic idea comes to mind I follow it regardless of consequence.

Sushi Fish- I like the idea of powerful women, I like the fact that even though she's naked she isn't vulnerable. She's supposed to be a genetically engineered creation (parody) of what men are supposed to find attractive. A futuristic Venus of Willendorf.

Gheru- Your right you know but I don't do subtlety, perhaps I should.

Doc Jon- I'm glad to hear that thats what I was going for. I'm still trying to figure out what my style will be I want it to be kind of cartoony but kind of realistic.

DMM- I was try to make it less alluring and more kind of disturbing.

by **KoolestArtist** » Tue Aug 07, 2012 5:59 pm

The first image is wierd. What exactly is she supposed to be? A robot?
What is the thing coming out of her forehead?
The pisture look flat. There are no varibles in color, shadows or highlights. And you light source is all over the place. Where are the highlights coming from.

The second, where do I even? Her head is too small for her body. And that thing on her head! What is it? is it a horn that got sawed off like hellboy? The lighting is all over the place, dark shadows in the upper right, but her shadow is right below her highlights from directly above, if this were the case, her shadow would be much darker.
The anattomy is very in accurate. Are those supposed to be muscles or is she wearing armor plating? why is the darkest shadow in her spine? It shouldn't be that deep. Her breast look like wrinkled deflated water balloons, and her skin has a leathery look to it.
I don't even have time or want to waste time on the feet (Hooves?).
I really don''t think you have enough free time. You should study anatomy. I don't think your porn collection is helping much.
Hope this helps.

by **Oni2030** » Tue Aug 07, 2012 11:35 pm

Thanks for looking at my work, I value you critique. Also that hellboy thing is hilarious!

by **KoolestArtist** » Wed Aug 08, 2012 12:08 pm

No thing at all. Just happy to help. Maybe give me some tips when I post my work. Tit for Tat and the like.

by **tob2007** » Sat Mar 23, 2013 10:53 pm

I was about to say you've got nothing on me... then I saw your artwork. Honestly, keep up the good work. It looks like all that extra time is paying off.