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[S.F. Jude Terror]

Good ole Capcoop. Remember when he used to post here? Those were good times. Gooooooooooood times. sigh

He was one of the good ones.

[Benderbrau]

He was one of the good ones.

He shall be missed









Except by Mahoney who's headed off to stalk him.

[Alchemic_Spider]

He shall be missed









Except by Mahoney who's headed off to stalk him.

I have to hold off. Working late tonight. I'll get back to him tomorrow...

[GHERU]

(in case you are still lurking here's some constructive criticism)
Holy needs-an-editor Batman

who are the people in the first page?



"not coming" is two words and a file belonging to Private Rogers would be "Rogers' file"

what does that second paragraph have to do with anything?

it would be helpful if it was sooner than her third panel before we are told that the woman is Sharon Carter


for someone who only knows what she read in a file, she sure does get close to Steve real quick. Is Sharon a slut?



would you like to borrow a comma, semi colon, a punctuation book?



as a friend, I am offering you one of my commas. Its ok, I have extras.



good job with the racist imagery



"U.S> Army" ? Is the U.S greater than the Army?
what does the page before this have to do with anything? Who would start a conversation like that?

Of the two people talking you made the Irish looking redhead the Jew? There's avoiding stereotypes and then there is absurdity



its "high-tail" or "hightail"



lame



that's a big tank



shield depth continuity issues

Overall - your choice of font color makes it hard to read sometimes, especially since I had to open each page as a new tab just to see the text.

[SuperginraiX]

Yeah, just looking at what RU posted (Hey, RU!), I'd say he was in desperate need of spell check, caption boxes, and word balloons. They'll help clarify the story a little bit. Also: RU's other comments.

[S.F. Jude Terror]

Yeah, just looking at what RU posted (Hey, RU!), I'd say he was in desperate need of spell check, caption boxes, and word balloons. They'll help clarify the story a little bit. Also: RU's other comments.

Yeah, I agree with Super (Hey, Super!), I gave some similar advice in the original thread a few months ago. Some more professional lettering and production would add a lot to this project. Also: less vile tirades at random commenters.

[SuperginraiX]

Yeah, I agree with Super (Hey, Super!), I gave some similar advice in the original thread a few months ago. Some more professional lettering and production would add a lot to this project. Also: less vile tirades at random commenters.

I don't know, Jude (Hey, Jude!), I've heard the saying that there's no such thing as bad press. Those people might not have read threads like THIS, though.

[Lord Simian]

I've heard the saying that there's no such thing as bad press.

Ah, but with behavior like that, he burned his bridge, which means he will never GET press from The Outhouse. I mean, we don't review fan fiction, but should he ever do anything original, we won't promote it....

[GHERU]

Yeah, just looking at what RU posted (Hey, RU!), I'd say he was in desperate need of spell check, caption boxes, and word balloons. They'll help clarify the story a little bit. Also: RU's other comments.

and Super is too nice to say this (Hey, Super) but if I am pointing out spelling mistakes then there are some major problems.

[S.F. Jude Terror]

and Super is too nice to say this (Hey, Super) but if I am pointing out spelling mistakes then there are some major problems.

Completely unrelated to RU (Hey RU!), I would in fact buy an autobiographical comic from Capcoop.

[Dragavon]

and Super is too nice to say this (Hey, Super) but if I am pointing out spelling mistakes then there are some major problems.

It took GHERU (Hey, GHERU) to make me understand the panels that were posted. COOPCAP (Bye, COOPCAP) should take some classes in storytelling or storyboarding or something to improve his skill because currently the strip makes no sense.

[Lord Simian]

Apparently, he also called me out in the comments at his fan fiction blog.

Can anyone help me undrstand why he called me out? I am fairly certain I never looked at his work before to comment...

[S.F. Jude Terror]

Apparently, he also called me out in the comments at his fan fiction blog.

Can anyone help me undrstand why he called me out? I am fairly certain I never looked at his work before to comment...

I have to echo what Simian said (Hey Simian!), I don't get where that came from. Also: Learn to follow the post format.

[Lord Simian]

I have to echo what Simian said (Hey Simian!), I don't get where that came from. Also: Learn to follow the post format.

[False Prophet]

How do I keep missing the great ones in their prime?