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by **squatters** » Sat Oct 19, 2013 2:11 pm

This is my kickstarter comic any support would be greatly appreciated!

http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/187924281/squatters

feel free to let me know what you think!

by **Victorian Squid** » Sat Oct 19, 2013 4:27 pm

I think the panels look good. Good luck in your campaign. My concern without seeing more would be a question as to what makes those characters interesting and different from the usual body-armored grunts you see so often in OGNs these days?

by **squatters** » Sat Oct 19, 2013 5:55 pm

because they aren't grunts.....!!!! also the biggest usp is that the whole story is based on scientific fact!!!

by **Regulator** » Sat Oct 19, 2013 6:19 pm

squatters wrote:because they aren't grunts.....!!!! also the biggest usp is that the whole story is based on scientific fact!!!

The fact that parasites exist? Kind of an odd stretch to use that as a selling point for what we're seeing. You're probably better off selling it on the merits of the story.

by **squatters** » Sat Oct 19, 2013 6:27 pm

no not that they exist, that they are able to take over the mind of other animals. It is based on the concept that they have gained conscious awareness. What do they want now they know they exist?