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Star Wars: Lucas Draft (SPOILERS)

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Star Wars: Lucas Draft (SPOILERS)

Postby David Bird » Wed Sep 04, 2013 8:48 pm

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Anyone else check this out? Not much story to it. It was all about introducing alternative versions of people and places. The interaction between characters seemed a bit over-dramatized, but perhaps that's a nod to Lucas' own storytelling.

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Re: Star Wars: Lucas Draft (SPOILERS)

Postby Flynn the Pirate » Wed Sep 04, 2013 8:54 pm

I picked this up today. After reading it, I'm not sorry that I got it, but it is definitely going to be a part of my collection more as a token of nerdiness than for its own merits.

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Re: Star Wars: Lucas Draft (SPOILERS)

Postby S.F. Jude Terror » Wed Sep 04, 2013 9:18 pm

Interesting. You would think that, based on how much worse the movies get after Lucas tinkers with them, going back to the purest, original draft would result in the most perfect story ever told.
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Re: Star Wars: Lucas Draft (SPOILERS)

Postby Flynn the Pirate » Wed Sep 04, 2013 9:31 pm

It's not "bad" per se. It reads kind of like a five year old recounting a summer blockbuster-type action flick. I mean, it's all "BANG" and "ZOOM" and "RARGH!" and "PEW-PEW!", but not a whole lot else.

Like I said, the real draw is the source material, not the story itself, in my opinion.

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Re: Star Wars: Lucas Draft (SPOILERS)

Postby Grayson » Wed Sep 04, 2013 9:35 pm

You have to love the fact that George Lucas is front and center on the cover...as well as Swamp Thing apparently... :smt017
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Re: Star Wars: Lucas Draft (SPOILERS)

Postby David Bird » Wed Sep 04, 2013 9:45 pm

I believe the 'Swamp Creature' is Han Solo, who, apparently, was originally envisioned as a green alien.

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Re: Star Wars: Lucas Draft (SPOILERS)

Postby Pink_Orchid » Wed Sep 04, 2013 10:31 pm

How close is it to the original script?

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Re: Star Wars: Lucas Draft (SPOILERS)

Postby fieldy snuts » Wed Sep 04, 2013 11:11 pm

Black_Orchid wrote:How close is it to the original script?


what's what im wondering too. was this how lucas envisioned it or are they going out of their way to establish everyone?

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Re: Star Wars: Lucas Draft (SPOILERS)

Postby David Bird » Thu Sep 05, 2013 12:12 am

Black_Orchid wrote:How close is it to the original script?


It depends on what you mean by original. This is based on his first draft. In that sense it is his original vision of the story. However, first drafts tend to be a long way from what is eventually sold to the studios, publishers, etc. And usually the changes made along the way are intended to improve things. So you wouldn't actually expect an initial draft to be any good. This, however, is only based on that draft. I think it really just spent the whole issue establishing how different it is.

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Re: Star Wars: Lucas Draft (SPOILERS)

Postby Pink_Orchid » Thu Sep 05, 2013 11:00 am

David Bird wrote:
It depends on what you mean by original. This is based on his first draft. In that sense it is his original vision of the story. However, first drafts tend to be a long way from what is eventually sold to the studios, publishers, etc. And usually the changes made along the way are intended to improve things. So you wouldn't actually expect an initial draft to be any good. This, however, is only based on that draft. I think it really just spent the whole issue establishing how different it is.


I mean the first draft. The one floating around online with a 14 year old Anakin that reads like terrible fanfic. I'm more curious if it's so bad it is funny. Like a B movie.

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Re: Star Wars: Lucas Draft (SPOILERS)

Postby eltopo » Thu Sep 05, 2013 11:03 am

Grayson wrote:You have to love the fact that George Lucas is front and center on the cover...as well as Swamp Thing apparently... :smt017

ha it does look a lot like him
the vader guy in the back looks awesome
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Re: Star Wars: Lucas Draft (SPOILERS)

Postby Chris » Thu Sep 05, 2013 11:05 am

I actually liked this a lot. :smt102
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Re: Star Wars: Lucas Draft (SPOILERS)

Postby Chris » Thu Sep 05, 2013 11:06 am

I actually liked this a lot. :smt102
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Re: Star Wars: Lucas Draft (SPOILERS)

Postby David Bird » Thu Sep 05, 2013 8:10 pm

Chris wrote:I actually liked this a lot. :smt102


And why shouldn't you? Personally, I don't think things have developed enough, storywise, for me to say 'yea' or 'nay.'

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Re: Star Wars: Lucas Draft (SPOILERS)

Postby David Bird » Thu Nov 07, 2013 9:24 am

So, the third issue came out yesterday. We get a C3PO and R2D2 scene much like the one in the movie, but we also get to see Darth Vadar in full garb, yet with his face uncovered. Oh, and apparently he's not a Sith. So far I haven't found the story to really stand on its own. What gets my attention are the differences between the first and final drafts.

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